Many people say that movies and TV programs affect us negatively while others say that they are two influential and useful media for us . How do movies and TV affect us ?

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question from both points of view. On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of watching different types of programs will transfer many cultures between community members. Like, when we follow the Chinese series,
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will develop our self and will support us by new data. Considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
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a second language
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programs, television
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opinion because they are suffering with their friends or their children.
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