Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Life
imprisonment is both supported and refuted by a majority
groups
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group
of people, whenever criminal acts take place. These two views are discussed before a position is declared. It goes without saying that criminals have to be punished according to their crimes. Some people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that
life sentence
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a life sentence
is the best alternative for crimes like murdering. In fact, they believe that by receiving
life sentence
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life sentences
a life sentence
, criminals find the golden opportunity to be trained and educated not to
repeate
to say, state, or perform again
repeat
report
criminal acts.
Moreover
, executing criminals may have a reverse impact on society and can provoke revenge and lead to fear and terror
.
Accept space
.
Thus
,
life
long imprisonment can be replaced by other punishments
instead
of executing. A prime example of
this
belief is minor crimes that usually
occured
come to pass
occurred
when young people are involved in
undeliberate
offences.
Therefore
, strict punishment must be related to major crimes in a
humanitarion
marked by humanistic values and devotion to human welfare
humanitarian
way.
On the other hand
, those people who have been
suffered
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suffering
from criminals, tend to insist on
appropriate punishment
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appropriate punishments
an appropriate punishment
the appropriate punishment
, relating to various crimes.
For instance
, an eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth is strongly proposed
instead
of mitigating circumstances like
life
sentence or other punishments.
In addition
, They think criminals have to be severely punished by strict laws and regulations.
Furthermore
, they believe if criminals be punished severely, other potential offenders might learn a lesson and not do the same.
Thus
, it is of a paramount importance that intimidating punishment be utilized as a
deterrance
a negative motivational influence
deterrence
deterrent
to avoid criminal acts in
future
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the future
. In Conclusion,
although
some groups of people vote for severe punishments, others refuse them.
Overally
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Overall
, I suppose that it definitely depends on the kinds of crimes and conditions,
however
, In my opinion, giving another chance to criminals to change their mind by mitigating circumstances and proper education may have better
result
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results
resulted
than executing and
life
imprisonment.

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