Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Life
imprisonment is both supported and refuted by a majority groups
of people, whenever criminal acts take place. These two views are discussed before a position is declared.
It goes without saying that criminals have to be punished according to their crimes. Some people Suggestion
group
belive
that accept as true; take to be true
believe
life sentence
is the best alternative for crimes like murdering. In fact, they believe that by receiving Suggestion
a life sentence
life sentence
, criminals find the golden opportunity to be trained and educated not to Suggestion
life sentences
a life sentence
repeate
criminal acts. to say, state, or perform again
repeat
report
Moreover
, executing criminals may have a reverse impact on society and can provoke revenge and lead to fear and terror .
Accept space
.
Thus
, life
long imprisonment can be replaced by other punishments instead
of executing. A prime example of this
belief is minor crimes that usually occured
when young people are involved in come to pass
occurred
undeliberate
offences. Therefore
, strict punishment must be related to major crimes in a humanitarion
way.
marked by humanistic values and devotion to human welfare
humanitarian
On the other hand
, those people who have been suffered
from criminals, tend to insist on Suggestion
suffering
appropriate punishment
, relating to various crimes. Suggestion
appropriate punishments
an appropriate punishment
the appropriate punishment
For instance
, an eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth is strongly proposed instead
of mitigating circumstances like life
sentence or other punishments. In addition
, They think criminals have to be severely punished by strict laws and regulations. Furthermore
, they believe if criminals be punished severely, other potential offenders might learn a lesson and not do the same. Thus
, it is of a paramount importance that intimidating punishment be utilized as a deterrance
to avoid criminal acts in a negative motivational influence
deterrence
deterrent
future
.
In Conclusion, Suggestion
the future
although
some groups of people vote for severe punishments, others refuse them. Overally
, I suppose that it definitely depends on the kinds of crimes and conditions, Suggestion
Overall
however
, In my opinion, giving another chance to criminals to change their mind by mitigating circumstances and proper education may have better result
than executing and Suggestion
results
resulted
life
imprisonment.Submitted by farbod4ever on
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