Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Life
imprisonment is both supported and refuted by a majority Use synonyms
groups
of people, whenever criminal acts take place. These two views are discussed before a position is declared.
It goes without saying that criminals have to be punished according to their crimes. Some people Suggestion
group
belive
that accept as true; take to be true
believe
Use synonyms
life sentence
is the best alternative for crimes like murdering. In fact, they believe that by receiving Suggestion
a life sentence
Use synonyms
life sentence
, criminals find the golden opportunity to be trained and educated not to Suggestion
life sentences
a life sentence
repeate
criminal acts. to say, state, or perform again
repeat
report
Moreover
, executing criminals may have a reverse impact on society and can provoke revenge and lead to fear and terrorLinking Words
.
Accept space
.
Thus
, Linking Words
life
long imprisonment can be replaced by other punishments Use synonyms
instead
of executing. A prime example of Linking Words
this
belief is minor crimes that usually Linking Words
occured
when young people are involved in come to pass
occurred
undeliberate
offences. Suggestion
Therefore
, strict punishment must be related to major crimes in a Linking Words
humanitarion
way.
marked by humanistic values and devotion to human welfare
humanitarian
On the other hand
, those people who have been Linking Words
suffered
from criminals, tend to insist on Suggestion
suffering
appropriate punishment
, relating to various crimes. Suggestion
appropriate punishments
an appropriate punishment
the appropriate punishment
For instance
, an eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth is strongly proposed Linking Words
instead
of mitigating circumstances like Linking Words
life
sentence or other punishments. Use synonyms
In addition
, They think criminals have to be severely punished by strict laws and regulations. Linking Words
Furthermore
, they believe if criminals be punished severely, other potential offenders might learn a lesson and not do the same. Linking Words
Thus
, it is of a paramount importance that intimidating punishment be utilized as a Linking Words
deterrance
to avoid criminal acts in a negative motivational influence
deterrence
deterrent
future
.
In Conclusion, Suggestion
the future
although
some groups of people vote for severe punishments, others refuse them. Linking Words
Overally
, I suppose that it definitely depends on the kinds of crimes and conditions, Suggestion
Overall
however
, In my opinion, giving another chance to criminals to change their mind by mitigating circumstances and proper education may have better Linking Words
result
than executing and Suggestion
results
resulted
life
imprisonment.Use synonyms
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