Smacking a child is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In recent times, it has become incredibly difficult to discipline a
child
. Some people believe that
child
spanking is the greatest form of enforcing discipline. In my opinion, I completely disagree that corporal punishment is the most appropriate form of
child
upbringing. The people that believe that smacking is the only way to instil morals in a
child
are of
this
opinion because they believe that inflicting pain on children help them to take on corrections more easily.
For instance
, a research carried out in some areas in Nigeria has shown that children whose guardian
adopted
Suggestion
Adopted
corporal punishment for their training are more well behaved. For
this
reason, people in
this
region result in punishing their offspring physically to correct their behaviour.
However
, the idea of sanctioning a
child
physically to uphold good values is completely unacceptable. The purpose of corporal discipline in coaching children
are
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is
most times defeated because they tend to become used to these pains and as
such
, do not take heed to corrections. It
also make
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also makes
these young ones distant themselves from people who administer pain to them.
For example
, there are instances of children causing pains to others because of their experiences at home.
Also
, children raised by being penalized physically end up suffering from psychological traumas in their adulthood. As
such
, these retribution
end
Suggestion
ends
up doing more harm than good. In conclusion, despite varying opinion on the
bes
(superlative of 'good') having the most positive qualities
best
way to chastise a
child
, I believe other ways of damnation is the better choice as corporal punishment has its negative effects outweighing the positives.
As a result
, it shouldn't be the adopted for use in training a
child
.
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