Do you agree that individuals are responsible for their own happiness or it depends on the factors of the person's life?

To my Facebook friends that lived, still live in the UK or anyone who's interested.
This
topic raises the controversial issue of whether the difference in the British accents could really affect on the English language acquisition or personal improving. I've been - for study purposes - in Scotland (Glasgow in specific) for 12 months over the period August 2018 to July 2019. From my expertise, I could say there's no one Scottish accent, but dozens. To illustrate, let's look at the accents which exist in Scotland. Glaswegian in Glasgow and Doric in Aberdeen, both accents are extremely hard to listen - to speak as well - but the rest areas in Scotland have got quite more understandable accents
such
as: Edinburgh, Dundee, St Andrews, Fort William, ...
etc.
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Etc.
Indisputably, Scotland is much more beautiful than England and nicer people there in Scotland.
Nevertheless
, the population is too low when compared to the population in England (1/12).
Thus
, more opportunities and options could be found in England. During my stay there, I've visited for a couple of days other cities in England.
For instance
: London, Newcastle, Leeds, Manchester, Birmingham, ...
etc.
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Etc.
I would like to point out that a few days in England improved my English language more than 1 month in Scotland. In conclusion, I would argue that you will find in Scotland: very kind people,
colder
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cold
weather, more beautiful nature and buildings, quite harder accent, and lower population
thus
little credible opportunities. You'll certainly find the opposite in England. '' English people are kind
too
in the direction of
to
''. Does my argument constitute a sufficient support to my claim? As long as some measurements are performed, or some areas are involved, if someone had the option to choose between two universities (The
first
one in Scotland and the other in England), what would you
advice
give advice to
advise
him/her to choose?
(
Accept space
(
Assuming that the two universities have got the same reputation, the same quality of teaching, the same educational system and the same facilities). I would like to
listen
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
from you as I really appreciate your opinions and your points of view. Sincerely, Ahmad

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