Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believes that some information is too important or too valuable to share freely. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Some people might think that advantages of publishing more information in every fields outweigh its optimal sharing, while some strongly believe that
researcher
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researchers
the researcher
a researcher
should not show important data to freely publish in order to achieve their objectives. Until now, there are many routes to search data either free access or pay money. The reasons for
this
are concerned with sharing total data is a good way to be successful. One advantage of publishing as much as possible is organization could sharply communicate citizen to learn how to develop skill in their new careers especially in economic turn down situation.
This
makes an individual become an expert in
certain job
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certain jobs
a certain job
.
Moreover
, the students have an opportunity to acquire reliable knowledge in order to solve their problems outside classrooms when they cannot contact professors.
Although
,
many
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much
information
have been published
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has been published
easily but
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easily, but
these
had not proved
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have not proven
haven't proven
didn't prove
for accuracy.
This
must have been checked reliable resources before
apply
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applying
in objective.
On the other hand
, the crucial data tend to be privacy in
company
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the company
and it must have limited persons to look for these
such
as strategy or budget.
This
is the reason that competitors might
plagiarism
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plagiarise
in management and planning.
However
, there are some disadvantages,
for example
in medical research, doctor and
healthcare
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health care
provider cannot access data in update new technology or guidelines in order to deal with new epidemic disease or complicated patients. In conclusion, it is difficult to share freely all types of information because beneficial for
inventers
someone who commits capital in order to gain financial returns
investors
. On balance I believe that the reason of post valuable data will make the world change better.
Finally
,
this
important as it is both generating education and income in the countries.
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