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Because of the negative effects on health of an inactive lifestyle, all university students and school children should be forced to do sports activities at least 3 times per week. Do you agree? Write your argumentative essay.

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Due to the negative impact of an unhealthy lifestyle, all college and school children need to be compelled to do sports activities at least 3 instance per week. In
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Firstly
, it is very important for every human being to do some kind of physical work which helps them to stay fit. Nowadays people are prone to obesity due hectic work schedule and overburden of studies which attract many diseases
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 Other hand due to food habits, many children
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 the people who are active or who plays sports are
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healthier
 compared to the people who are inactive. Today`s world we are living in the digital world most of the
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 It is the duty of college and school to set up disciple in the student life
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 In conclusion, I agree with the above statement that education institution must make student`s to do workout thrice in a week which help them to stay and less prone to
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an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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