MANY PEOPLE ARE NOW SPENDING MORE AND MORE TIME TRAVELLING TO WORK OR SCHOOL. SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT THIS IS A NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT WHILE OTHERS THINK THERE ARE SOME BENEFITS. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Some

peopele

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

said that

travel

is a downside

develping

relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply

developing

since human spend too much

time

to

travel

either work or school. While

on the other hand

, human take a

trasportation

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

or

prive

confined to particular persons or groups or providing privacy

private

vehicle is a

conventient

suited to your comfort or purpose or needs

convenient

way to

achive

to gain with effort

achieve

archive

thier

of them or themselves

their

destination. In

this

essasy

an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

assay

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

will argured

Suggestion

will argue

will argued

will agreed

that

although

trveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

can be a

commonn

belonging to or participated in by a community as a whole; public

common

way to workplace or education institution, our planet is

devasting

making light of

devastating

and

demaging

(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury

damaging

by carbon

dioxide which

Accept comma addition

dioxide, which

mean human produce too much pollution in the atmosphere and

destory

do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of

destroy

the earth.

To begin

with

this

, the

,

Accept space

,

merit

trasportation

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

development

is shorten

Suggestion

is shortening

has shortened

shortens

the

time

from here to there.

For instance

, in the past ancients complete

thier

of them or themselves

their

journey on foot, whereas these days people go to work or school by school bus, train,

subay

an underground tunnel or passage enabling pedestrians to cross a road or railway

subway

or

prive

confined to particular persons or groups or providing privacy

private

cars. In

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

world, the

benift

financial assistance in time of need

benefit

benefits

of

this

is that

peopole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

can save a lot precisely

time

and easily go to

any where

at or in or to any place

anywhere

they want.

Nerverthless

Suggestion

Nevertheless

, the

shortcomming

a failing or deficiency

shortcoming

shortcomings

of

traspontation

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

develpment

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

development

developments

is that human produce too much

polluition

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

,

as a result

, pollution is creasing dramatically and influence entire planet,

such

as global warming, air pollution and

shorage

the property of being an amount by which something is less than expected or required

shortage

of petroleum and water

so on

in the near future

soon

. To illustrate, Australia

suffering

Suggestion

suffers

is suffering

form

a giver or sender

from

fire in many

part

Suggestion

parts

of cities, millions of

anamial

died

bacuse

for the reason that; on account of

because

that, Australia citizens running out water and don't have

place

Suggestion

a place

to live. In

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

world,

human being

Suggestion

the human being

a human being

is the roof of cause global warming, since take transportation

ans

in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

drive

prive car

Suggestion

a private car

private car

price car

can release too much carbon dioxide which is

damaginmg

(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury

damaging

ecosystem. In conclusion, despite

travel

can make human life convenient and easier, and save

pricely

rich and superior in quality

princely

pricey

precisely

time

.

However

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

maintain that

travel

is a drawback development because our

palnet

(astronomy) any of the nine large celestial bodies in the solar system that revolve around the sun and shine by reflected light; Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto in order of their proximity to the sun; viewed from the constellation Hercules, all the planets rotate around the sun in a counterclockwise direction

planet

is dying, entire earth is

collpasing

break down, literally or metaphorically

collapsing

.If human don't know how to stop produce

pollutio

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

and

perserve

keep or maintain in unaltered condition; cause to remain or last

preserve

to plant

,

Accept space

,

the most

vicitm

Suggestion

victims

victim

would be human self.