Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that both wealthy and the less privileged students have difficulty getting into universities. I tend to disagree

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essay I shall discuss why I believe students with strong financial background have advantages over the others, providing funding to be the only variable.

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with, students with below average academic grades are less likely getting into universities,

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there is money, options come along. In many countries, universities are privately funded and willing to approve admission for students with generous parents. A recent research showed, In the United States over 30 percent of current sitting students in Ivy-League universities came from families financially contributed to the education provider.

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option is clearly not for the poor. For academically sound students

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, solid family financial support can

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make substantial differences, because students from poor families have more money-related distractions from

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. Becoming a good student is no easy task, while rich students have all the freedom and

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focusing on their academic tasks, many poor families require their children to work so the parents can afford the increasingly costly university tuition fees. I remember my cousin had to take a

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senior year in high school after he failed his

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attempt, because he worked most of his off-school

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while preparing for university. Study like any skills in life needs

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to master and excel and

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is a privilege which many poor students don’t have. Based on my analysis

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a significantly better chance

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getting into higher education despite his or her academic performance.