Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam,

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Monday I ordered a

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for my HTC phone from your eCommerce website. I was excited when it arrived but very disappointed to find that the product was not as promised and totally unusable. I am hoping you will replace it. In relation to the specifics of the order, I purchased

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leather

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through your website called Electric Gadgets on November 08th using my PayPal account. The order number is 2584205 and I am attaching a copy of my receipt with

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letter. The issue with the

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is that it is not a genuine leather product and I am unable to store my phone inside it securely. The picture of the item on your website clearly shows the

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supports the HTC Desire 12+ model and is an original leather product. So I’m sure

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is a manufacturing flaw. As a solution, and because I really like the design and look of the

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, I am hoping that you will agree to replace it with a new and genuine one for free.

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, I would like a full refund and I will be contacting PayPal complaints if I do not hear back from you in regards to

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within a week. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours faithfully, John Smith

Abhishek Wed Nov 27 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

228 words

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Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays most green energy is becoming evermore prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You need to write a letter of apology to your loved one for hurting him

Some people believe that anyone can create art, such as painting, pottery, music, etc. others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that teachers require training to become good at their profession. Others think a good teacher has all the necessary qualities and does not need any training. Discuss both views and give your opinion.