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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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There are countries where more
people
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 are deciding to live by themselves than they did in the past.
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 essay would argue that
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 is a positive development because these
people
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’s actions are not restricted by housemates and it helps a country’s
economy
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. When
people
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 live alone, they don’t need to accommodate others who are living with them.
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 can reduce the stress of having to resolve any confusion that may occur
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people
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 having different ideas of how a house should be maintained and it can help them to save time by not having to wait for others to finish using appliances or equipment that they need to use.
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, the Guardian reported that families of four or more take an extra 20 minutes on average to get ready in the morning than a person who lives alone.
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 that, a country’s
economy
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 will grow if more
people
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 are living alone.
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 is because these
people
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 are no longer sharing bills and
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 more money is being spent.
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, to avoid loneliness, these
people
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 tend to get out of the house more often and engage in social activities with their friends and family which results in more spending and aids the development of the
economy
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 even
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.
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, a survey carried out at
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 of Tokyo found that students who stayed in one-bedroom accommodation were 37% more likely to go out in the evenings than those who lived in shared accommodation. In conclusion, the increasing trend of
people
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 living alone is beneficial as these individuals have freedom from the stresses of sharing accommodation with others and it creates more spending which is good for the
economy
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.
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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