Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Many people wonder about

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. Some people think that it has

negative impact

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a negative impact

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our life.

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, others said it has been playing as positive effect on

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world.

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issue. Why

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has been playing a negative effect in our

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lives

?Of Course for several reasons:

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, it motivates the psychological point in everyone, and women

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. They will run to buy

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advertised

product especially

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product, especially

if it’s from cosmetic roof, just to show their beauty to men, which may lead to negative effects of too much sexual attention.

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, you can sit comfortably with your family and suddenly the telephone is ringing, but it’s nothing important, it’s just another company try to convince you to buy one of their products. It is a real intrusive example of

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an advertisement

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, sometimes you do not have the financial ability to buy something, but with these new methods of

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, you will run to buy it, which will affect your budget.

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, there are some good sides to advertising.

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, it compares the prices of many companies which benefit the consumer.

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, it really opens our vision to see more products which we do not

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know it

unless the TV or Radio advertised them.

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to, it breaks our daily routine and allows us to see new faces and learn the language better with the help of the daily updates they deliver through

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. In conclusion, as we can see there are many aspects

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essay. I feel that we gain no benefits at all from

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, it plays on

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the minds

of people buy more things that they do not need it at all.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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