Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern era, most of the people around the world started the

change

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changing

their habits of shopping. Especially in

last

decant, number of online shopping is increasing. With

this

new changing bring some positive and negative effects for the society. In

this

essay I will examine the both of sides

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in

of

to

this

issue. Generally speaking, the online shopping is getting

be

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to be

more and more vital for each individual in society. Obviously, there is a some strong

sides

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side

of

this

development.

First

of all, when purchasing something on

internet most part

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the internet most part

of people spending a less time rather than traditional shopping. For illustration, especially

such

as a business man and business woman unable to visit the real shopping

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

and in

this

way might seem perfect for them.

Secondly

, the

internet

has a wide range of different option.

Therefore

, with

this

option people be able to

seen

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see

different price and quality in a concurrent when sitting the home.

Thus

,

this

way is inevitable succeed option

such

as a disable

persons

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person

.

For example

, any kind of people who has a

disable

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disability

or need to accompanying

person

could be shopping

easily

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easy

ease

.

Therefore I

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Therefore, I

partially agree to

this

advantages

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advantage

is vital and it

explain

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explains

why the online shopping is getting more popular. And the other side, there has a some

negatives

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negative

side which effect on people. The

internet

is might be

comfortable but

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comfortable, but

it’s not

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meant

the safely. Some part of people

has

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have

a bad experience with online shopping.

First

of all, the cyber theft. With the development in

internet

cause new type of crime. For illustration, the credit card crime which is really bad and important.Some people who couldn’t use to know

internet

could be in

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danger

.

Such

as an elder

people mostly

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person, mostly

person mostly

consist of

this

type of individuals.

Secondly

, the young

person

is have

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is having

has

to learn limited of shopping.The young

person

could be shopping with their

parents

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parents'

parent

card on online without the permission. And

this

conditions

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condition

might be causes discussing

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with

family.

Therefore should

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Therefore, should

everyone have to learn

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using

the

internet

for

prevent

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preventing

the disadvantages. In conclusion, the advantages are more than the disadvantages. Just each

person

need

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needs

to learn relevant consume on

internet

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the internet

.Because the online shopping is future and inevitable.