Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many are of the opinion that the possibility of
endangerad
(of flora or fauna) in imminent danger of extinction
endangered
plants and
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
is one the most worrying environmental
problemas
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problems as
problem as
while others think that there are numerous problems more pressing.
Although
loss of
species
of plant and animals
are
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is
serious, in my opinion the impact of
pollution
is greater and more worrying. On the one hand, the number of green
area
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areas
have been reducing
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has been reduced
has been reducing
and
consequently
the amount of animals. There are several reasons for
this
reduction
such
as burning, hunting and disordered exploration. It can make
species
extints
no longer in existence; lost or especially having died out leaving no living representatives
extinct
, and
also
can destroy the delicate balance between different
species
and food chain. Recently, part of the Amazon Forest was
burned destroying
Accept comma addition
burned, destroying
much of vegetation and wild
species
in exchange for getting a space for livestock.
On the other hand
, there other environmental problems that may be considered serious
such
as air and water
pollution
. The air
pollution
is predominantly caused by gases emitted by vehicles and industries.
This
type
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connects a noun with the preceding word
of
pollution
can result in unexpected weather patterns, and
also
affect the human health.
In addition
, the water
pollution
has been
skyrocketed
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skyrocketing
in the current juncture.
For instance
, the amount of plastic that has been found in the sea that can choke and enter in the digestive tract of marine animals, killing many of them. These environmental problems can lead to loss of biodiversity, a human
diseases
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disease
as well as natural disasters.
Finally
, I believe that fauna and flora must be looked at carefully, but preservation must begin in the air and water that are essential to any life on earth. In order to remedy
this
problem the existing materials should be replaced by biodegradable material, car and industries should operate
sustainably
, and people should be more aware about environmental preservation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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