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Many nowadays prefer online education to face to face education. Do you consider this a positive or a negative development?

#education #face #development
People are too busy to go for regular
education
 and are trying new methods of online studies, nowadays. According to me,
face
 to
face
education
 is much better than distance
education
 as it helps in enhancing the personality of the students.
In addition
 to
this
, it is
also
 helpful in clearing all the doubts in a better way. The main merit of classroom studies is that pupils meets
number
Suggestion
a number
the number
 of fellow students along with many teachers who are helpful in bringing positive change in their outlook.
Further
, it is
also
 possible to clear the students’ problems by coming at their level and according to individual interest and intellect which is not possible in online studies. Distance
education
 may be positive for students who do not have time to pursue classroom
education
 or for those who are working. Online studies may
also
 help the students who have some locomotive or other disabilities. Disability would not hinder their urge to study even if they are not able to move. In my considered opinion, the merits of
face
 to
face
education
 outweigh its demerits.
Therefore
, all students should get
opportunity
Suggestion
the opportunity
an opportunity
opportunities
 to interact with their teachers and fellow students in order to have all round development.

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