Your friend will be staying at your home, but you can’t be there. Write a letter in which you explain: - How the keys will get to him/her - How to use the electrical appliances - Recommend some interesting places to visit

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Dear Mohit, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I was so happy to know you are coming here for a week’s holiday but unfortunately, I have to leave for an urgent business trip to Delhi. I have to leave on 20th May as a few clients are coming from

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. There is an exhibition going on in Delhi which they are coming to see and they have requested me to show me our company’s products there only. I shall be leaving the key with the neighbours. You will find everything you need inside. The fridge is stacked with eatables and the TV has a cable connection. If you have any problems regarding the usage of electrical appliances, you may ask my neighbour, Mrs Neeru. She is very helpful. There are some

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places in my home town which you must see. There are two temples related to the sixth guru of the Sikhs and an ancient Shiva Temple.

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there is a restaurant, Haveli, which depicts traditional Punjabi hospitality. Every night there is a cultural show

also

over there. Don’t miss

this

show. You can ask my neighbour to accompany you. Hope you have a nice time. Once again I apologise for not being there to give you company. Yours lovingly, Manjot.

Thu Jan 16 2020

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