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You recently missed a flight. You think this was the airline’s fault. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, •explain why u believe airline is at fault •describe the impact it had on your journey. •say what you want the airline to do

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Dear sir, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am writing regarding a flight I missed
due to
 the negligence of your airline’s staff that I felt needed to be reported. Post the security check, I was asked by the crew members to wait in a lounge after getting the boarding pass as there was a delay in the flight. Later, I found out after enquiring that the flight already left without an announcement. I was supposed to be at my destination by evening for a business purpose. Eventually, it led to a potential loss of an important client of ours.
Nonetheless
, the reputation of our firm
also
 got damaged.
Although
 it is not possible to undo the damage caused I would like your airline to reimburse me with the full ticket and a free travel voucher for my next trip owing to the inconvenience I had to suffer. I look forward to your comments on
this
 matter. Warm Regards, Karan Mehta
Submitted by karanmehta37872 on

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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single idea to improve readability.
complete response
While your response is complete and well-structured, adding more specific details about the circumstances can strengthen your case.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a respectful and formal tone throughout, which is suitable for this type of correspondence.
logical structure
The letter is logically structured, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
complete response
You have clearly explained the issue, its impact, and your desired resolution.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite, adding a professional touch to the letter.
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