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Some people argue that working in a large company is important, others however give preferance to work in a small company.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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 side working for a large
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 brings many benefits.
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 of all,
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 has better medical insurance, higher salary. Often employees of a large
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 have less responsibility.
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, they feel more secure because their
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 has more clients and
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 means a better chance to survive on the modern market.
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,
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 working for a large
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 has less chance to be promoted because
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's manager does not want to lose his or her job unless she or he is promoted.
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, from my observation, managers of a large
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 do not pay much attention to
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's solutions and suggestions. From the other side working for a small
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 has many advantages too.
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,
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 has a better chance to be promoted.
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,
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 can talk to the owner of the
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 about any improvements that can be done in order to get more profit. Another important aspect of working for a small
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 is the opportunities to find out more about how a
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 works.
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 of
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 can gain more experience and get better recommendations.
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,
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also
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 has some disadvantages.
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,
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 can get less salary, worse medical benefits, etc. To sum up, I think that every person chooses for himself what he or she wants. If
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 wants a better career and more responsibilities than a small
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 is a better choice.
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, working for a large
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 may be a good option too
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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