Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A set of mortals
insist
Suggestion
insists
that
prison
sentences for longer duration is the best measure to reduce
crime rate
Suggestion
the crime rate
crime rates
while,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
reckon that
crime
can be reduced by some other alternative ways.
However
, in my opinion rehabilitation or community services are the better alternative but,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think longer
prison
sentences must be for the serious criminals.
To begin
with those who advocate with the
first
notion think that offenders should be punished with
longer
Suggestion
long
prison
sentences because
this
phenomenon can generate fear in a criminal's mind.
In other words
, if a person is already aware of the intensity of punishment before committing any
crime
, it will discourage him from becoming a criminal.
For example
, in the India, the rapist and the murderer usually get life time
prison
sentences, resulting in making people think twice before committing any serious
crime
.
Hence
, imposing strict
punishments
Suggestion
punishment
deters people from committing
crime
.
On the other hand
, some other alternative can be taken to solve the problem. Rehabilitation service should be available for the criminals who commit
crime
by mistake, and realize their wrong doing.
Moreover
, awareness programs in
prison
should be held, about the consequences of the
crime
which, will
deters
Suggestion
deter
them to think about
crime
again.
For example
, if any person done
crime
once in life and
then
he learned about the outcomes of a
crime
. He
definitely avoid
Suggestion
definitely avoids
has definitely avoided
the path of
crime
. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would strongly say that the criminals with a negative history should be held longer in the
prison
. But at the same time, people who commit minor crimes and possess good
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
should be penalized in different ways, so that they can live a respectful life later and give something back to the community

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