Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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A set of mortals

insist

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insists

that

prison

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sentences for longer duration is the best measure to reduce

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crime rate

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the crime rate

crime rates

while,

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

reckon that

crime

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can be reduced by some other alternative ways.

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, in my opinion rehabilitation or community services are the better alternative but,

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think longer

prison

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sentences must be for the serious criminals.

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with those who advocate with the

first

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notion think that offenders should be punished with

longer

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long

prison

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sentences because

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phenomenon can generate fear in a criminal's mind.

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, if a person is already aware of the intensity of punishment before committing any

crime

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, it will discourage him from becoming a criminal.

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, in the India, the rapist and the murderer usually get life time

prison

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sentences, resulting in making people think twice before committing any serious

crime

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, imposing strict

punishments

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punishment

deters people from committing

crime

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, some other alternative can be taken to solve the problem. Rehabilitation service should be available for the criminals who commit

crime

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by mistake, and realize their wrong doing.

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, awareness programs in

prison

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should be held, about the consequences of the

crime

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which, will

deters

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deter

them to think about

crime

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again.

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, if any person done

crime

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once in life and

then

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he learned about the outcomes of a

crime

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. He

definitely avoid

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definitely avoids

has definitely avoided

the path of

crime

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. In conclusion,

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would strongly say that the criminals with a negative history should be held longer in the

prison

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. But at the same time, people who commit minor crimes and possess good

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

should be penalized in different ways, so that they can live a respectful life later and give something back to the community

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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