Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A set of mortals
insist
that Suggestion
insists
prison
sentences for longer duration is the best measure to reduce crime rate
while, Suggestion
the crime rate
crime rates
other
reckon that plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
crime
can be reduced by some other alternative ways. However
, in my opinion rehabilitation or community services are the better alternative but, i
think longer refers to the speaker or writer
I
prison
sentences must be for the serious criminals.
To begin
with those who advocate with the first
notion think that offenders should be punished with longer
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long
prison
sentences because this
phenomenon can generate fear in a criminal's mind. In other words
, if a person is already aware of the intensity of punishment before committing any crime
, it will discourage him from becoming a criminal. For example
, in the India, the rapist and the murderer usually get life time prison
sentences, resulting in making people think twice before committing any serious crime
. Hence
, imposing strict punishments
deters people from committing Suggestion
punishment
crime
.
On the other hand
, some other alternative can be taken to solve the problem. Rehabilitation service should be available for the criminals who commit crime
by mistake, and realize their wrong doing. Moreover
, awareness programs in prison
should be held, about the consequences of the crime
which, will deters
them to think about Suggestion
deter
crime
again. For example
, if any person done crime
once in life and then
he learned about the outcomes of a crime
. He definitely avoid
the path of Suggestion
definitely avoids
has definitely avoided
crime
.
In conclusion, i
would strongly say that the criminals with a negative history should be held longer in the refers to the speaker or writer
I
prison
. But at the same time, people who commit minor crimes and possess good behavior
should be penalized in different ways, so that they can live a respectful life later and give something back to the communitymanner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
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