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You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

#friends’ #house #business #seminar #australia #file #documents #room #friend #post
Dear John I am writing
this
 letter to inquire about the file I forget in my room while I was staying
in
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 your house.
Although
, after attending
business
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a business
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 seminar in
Sydney
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the Sydney
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 auditorium, I arrived late at home because it was almost 90 minutes drive from the auditorium and your house which make me very tired because
i
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 am not used to
for
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long drives. As
i
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 remember
i
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 keep my things on the side table
next
 to my bed.
Its
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red
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a red
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 colour file with my company logo on top of it and MOU agreement title
written
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 on it. Though,
Next
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 morning when
i
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 was leaving for the airport, I forget
it
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 put in my bag, which is very important because
this
 file
contain
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 official documents and MOU etc. I am requesting you to please send it as soon as possible to my postal address by urgent courier service. I will pay you all the courier expenses
to
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you
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.
Your
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 Faithful
Omair
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Email

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Examples:

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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