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At the present time ,the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults ,compared with no of older peoples .do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Recently, It has been observed that some nations have comparatively high number of youngsters than the aged people. There occurs several advantages and disadvantages of having
such
 a huge amount of the young generation. I believe it is more beneficial than detrimental. My position
is justified
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is further justified
further
.
To begin
, there are several advantages of having more young people. The foremost one is
,
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,
 they understand the modern world better. They have
creativity
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created
 more as compare than that of
aged
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aging
peson
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people
person
,
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,
resulting into more innovative ideas and techniques which can lead to many discoveries for the betterment of mankind
.
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.
For instance
, a teenager came up with an alternative of the petroleum fuel used in the vehicles.
This
 innovation will be helpful to reduce the usage of fossil fuels.
This
 discovery of his brought him appreciation from all over the world.
Furthermore
, the youth
have
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has
flexibility
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the flexibility
 to adapt into the surrounding which senior people lack. They are open to new ideas, new
people which
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people, which
makes
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make
 easy for them to get involved in the surrounding environment.
For
example if
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example, if
an
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a
 young individual is shifted to a new city it is comparatively easy for him to make friends than of
individual
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an individual
the individual
 beyond the age of 55.
In contrast
 to
above
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the above
, the young adults have less experience in many areas of life which affects their ability to make
decision
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a decision
decisions
the decision
.
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.
Older people have more experience as they have been through the situations before and can
also
 make firm decisions. To sum up
,
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,
 the increasing number of juveniles in countries
have
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has
 more merits than its demerits as they have great flexibility along with the modern solutions to the new issues.

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