Question: Computer are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give tour opinion.

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is no doubt that these days all people are using

computer

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in education. The question is what is the advantages and disadvantages in

useing

an act that exploits or victimizes someone (treats them unfairly)

using

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computer

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computers

the computer

for learning?

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going to discuss my view and draw my personal conclusion.

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terms of positive side

the state prevailing during the absence of war

peace

help us get the information faster. The main reason to supper

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claim is that

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now thanks

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now, thanks

to the internet have access in a lot of

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initial

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does

research in

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a short period

. In other word,

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have many

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benefits

benefit

in teaching so,

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all people use it.

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the thing named or in question

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leads

to lack of skill in writing

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In 2005 report shows that 66 percent of persons who use

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in writing are not good in writing.

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lead to health problems

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as, loneliness.

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is because, people spend too much looking at the screen.

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, wastes a

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lot

of funding of the

govenment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

because is needed in every

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school

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unviersities

the body of faculty and students at a university

universities

and collage.

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conclusion,

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important in education it

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a negative effect

negative effects

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believe that

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computer

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the computer

a computer

is good in education

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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5 paragraphs

195 words

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Question: Computer are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give tour opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to such service?

As most spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction?