You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter • Introduce yourself • Describe your plans for the party • Invite your neighbor to come

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Dear

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Alen, I have moved

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apartment and have recently come to Mumbai by my company (Airtel) as a Manager. I am here living with my wife and

7 year old

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son.

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letter is to invite you to my son’s birthday party on 20 February

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2020. The party will start at 7 pm along with

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drink

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and starters, followed by a musical show by a local band ‘Yuva’

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the lawn which would lead to some noise and I wanted to inform you before as well.

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, dinner will be served from 8:30 pm at the home. For children, there would

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be a puppet show from 9 - 9:15 pm in the living room of our house and could be enjoyed by us as well. It would be grateful if you come along with your family as we were unable to meet till date.

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a great opportunity for our families to have acquaintances. With Regards, Neha

Sat Jan 18 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

162 words

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