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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter • Introduce yourself • Describe your plans for the party • Invite your neighbor to come

#home #party #noise #neighbor #plans
Dear
Mr.
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 Alen, I have moved
in
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into
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A6
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 apartment and have recently come to Mumbai by my company (Airtel) as a Manager. I am here living with my wife and
7 year old
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 son.
This
 letter is to invite you to my son’s birthday party on 20 February
,
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 2020. The party will start at 7 pm along with
soft
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drink
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 and starters, followed by a musical show by a local band ‘Yuva’
in
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 the lawn which would lead to some noise and I wanted to inform you before as well.
Finally
, dinner will be served from 8:30 pm at the home. For children, there would
also
 be a puppet show from 9 - 9:15 pm in the living room of our house and could be enjoyed by us as well. It would be grateful if you come along with your family as we were unable to meet till date.
Therefore
 a great opportunity for our families to have acquaintances. With Regards, Neha

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