you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, and when you got home, you realized that you have left your wallet in your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend; thanking for the holiday explaining that you left your wallet at their place providing instructions on how to send it back

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Dear Michael, Thank you for warmly welcoming me and arranging a wonderful vacation. The friendliness of your family members is overwhelming, and I greatly savoured the scrumptious food cooked by your mother during my stay. I should especially thank you for the dinner you arranged on the

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day of my holiday. I was a little dizzy after a couple of brandy shots I had with you after dinner, and when I was back in my home, I realized that I have left my wallet on the dinner table. There should be around $2000 in the purse

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to my driver's license and credit cards. Luckily, my sister is returning tomorrow after visiting some of her friends, and she will pass your house on her way. I have asked her to drop by your place to collect the wallet, and it will be a great

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if you can send it over with her. Thanks for everything and take care until the

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meet up. Best wishes Dilan

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

169 words

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you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, and when you got home, you realized that you have left your wallet in your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend; thanking for the holiday explaining that you left your wallet at their place providing instructions on how to send it back

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