Some people believe that to become successful in sports one should have a natural talent. Others think that perseverance and practice are a crucial part of success. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Sports are now becoming the core part of our country, it is now appreciated on both the

stages national and international

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national and international stages

.Few communities have

belief

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believed

that to get

success

this

field one should be good gifted with

this

talent

. While on the opposite

side some

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side, some

have

perspective

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a perspective

that

hardwork

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hard work

and regular practice is the key to

success

. Both the opinions will be

ansewered

react verbally

answered

ensured

further

. Focusing on the former opinion that sports are

inbuild

existing as an essential constituent or characteristic

inbuilt

talent

because some sports are

learn

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learned

through practice it is naturally there in individuals.

However

, it is tested statistically that some people have

athelic

skills from their born itself and they can easily grasp any sports and can win the race.

For instance

, the people of China are more likely to win the sports because of their in

build

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building

skills and easy to grasp power.

On the contrary

, the latter opinion is that the

success

will get from the diligence and rehearsal because everyone is not gifted with

talent

by God and if the individuals will not put efforts and practice in that

then

they will

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

from

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for

winning.

For example

Accept space

the sports player of India like

marrie

used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs

maria

mere

kom

not agitated; without losing self-possession

calm

, p.v. Sindhu,

saniya

nehval

an extended fictional work in prose; usually in the form of a story

novel

are

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all not gifted with

talent

, they all have put so many efforts in their work and got successful in their life. To conclude, as per my observation

talent

will be

inbuild but

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enabled, but

enabled but

in build but

one

have

Suggestion

has

to put endurance and discipline or polish that

talent

to become it more graceful which lead them towards

success

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2Word repetition
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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Some people believe that to become successful in sports one should have a natural talent. Others think that perseverance and practice are a crucial part of success. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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film reviews wanted Have you seen a really exciting film recently, at teh cinema or on TV? write a review describing it and saying why you would recommend it to other people of your age

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