Both governments and individuals are spending vast amounts of money protecting animals and their habitat. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?

It is often observed that a hefty amount of resources is deployed on protecting animals and their habitats by both states and people. It is argued that

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resources could be better spent in tackling other basic problems in

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namely

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and health care. I support

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view that

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of allocating resources extensively on preserving animals and their natural

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, it is more sensible to address pressing issues of the

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. Many countries around the world are facing an enormous number of problems. One of these problems is

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. According to the UN report, more than half of the people in the world are living below the

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line.

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means that either they have no-access or limited access to food

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or shelter. In

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a miserable situation, it seems illogical and insensible that the governments and the people who are better off spend their money on protecting animals and their habitat, while the poor are disenfranchised of basic life necessities.

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behavior

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creates not only depression and hopelessness in the

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society but

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society, but

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compel poor to commit crimes or sometimes suicide.

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, recently in a slump of Karachi, a disheartened father tried to take his own life, when his children who did not eat anything for days, asked him for food.

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, if the government or people used their money to eradicate

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and hunger,

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would have never happened.

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,

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gives birth to several other problems

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as pollution, which not only affects our

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, but other species as well.

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, when people are not able to take care of themselves, how will they be able to take care of their

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? Due to

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, insufficient sanitary facilities and improper sewerage infrastructure in developing countries, rivers and oceans are polluted to a point that they are no more inhabitable for aquatic biodiversity.

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, a recent survey showed that a variety of fish population has been reduced to almost half in the Indus River, owing to industrial and residential waste being dumped into the river.

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, it is crucial to allocate funds for the development of

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infrastructures, which not only improves

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saves other species and their habitats. To conclude, while other people’s opinion may vary, in my opinion, the governments and the

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should put in ample funding to address fundamental issues

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as

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and its related problems which directly affects people and the

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rather than on the matters that are merely the result of the above factors.