You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administer. In your letter. Say which part-time course you booked Explain why you need to cancel your book Ask about booking a different course

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I have to cancel my booking of

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Psychology

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which will be held over the upcoming month. I am a sophomore student of Psychology at your college and I booked

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part-time

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on your official website on 10 March. Unfortunately, a few days ago my aunt had an accident in London, since she does not have any other

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country, I should go there and take care of her for a

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, I will not be able to attend the lessons and I will lag behind the rest of the class.

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, I would extremely appreciate it if you could cancel

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course

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for

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term.

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, I am truly interested in

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course

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and I would be grateful if you could give me some details about re-booking it for next term. Thank you for your cooperation in

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matter and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Tina Ross

tabans1992Sat Feb 22 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure to include clear paragraphing to enhance readability, especially between the reasons for cancellation and the request for information about re-booking.

task achievement

Consider adding a more formal salutation or a subject line in the letter to enhance professionalism.

task achievement

The letter has a clear purpose and addresses all required points of the task.

task achievement

The tone is appropriate, polite, and shows empathy, which is suitable for a formal letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

170 words

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