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The digital age has made the gap between the younger and older generations wider. Give reason for your own answer.

#age #gap #generations #reason
According to one of the latest research, young people do no speak often with parents and older people and the major
responsable
Suggestion
responsibility
responsible
 is their digital devices, like phones or personal computer. Unfortunately, juveniles use them as a
shelt
a protective covering or structure
shield
site
set
where
ligament made of metal and used to fasten things or make cages or fences etc
wire
 to put in every their feelings and sensations. If teenagers relinquished scrolling their phones, they could figure out how sensational chatting with an elderly person is. Through their stories,
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
 could learn new points of view and enrich their own lives. The overwhelming truth is that older people fell out of the current time because they are almost ignored by new generations that’s why the chasm is increasingly boasting. What was
gone
Suggestion
going
 wrong? It’s my belief that older people are a precious treasure from whom we can get
advises
a proposal for an appropriate course of action
advices
 and improve our self growth. If new generation
give
Suggestion
gives
 attention to seniority, there would a drastic reduction of the gap between new generations.
Although
 it is difficult to relate with people who belong to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 generation, because of time change as well as new ways of thinking, being open-minded towards seniority could be the
changement
 that we all are expecting.

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