Telling the truth at all times is not essential. On some occasions it is necessary to tell lies, and it is wrong to tell the truth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#truth #times #occasions

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common many people

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common, many people

say that

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it is

it's

okay sometimes to

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hide

things for the sake of

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of them or themselves

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purpose, others say always should tell the truth in any situation no matter what is about. I strongly believe that

trustworthness

the trait of deserving trust and confidence

trustworthiness

is the best option

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essay will discuss the bad and good of being hearty.

Firstly

the bond we have built with our surrounds mainly

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having a base

based

on truth

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if we being

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layered

with them the trustees will disappear gradually till lost the relationships. People lay because they might they think in some situations if

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people in general

they

thou

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truth

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the truth

will face many problems

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to so extreme a degree

such

as lost, disappointed.

For example

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of someone whose marriage has been legally dissolved

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same times you want to protect

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loved

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to a very great extent or degree

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know it sooner

know sooner it

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because might feel stupid or get out harder from.

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affects

affect

our personality

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being known as a

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will ruin us

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however our

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however, our

children taught from us to

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put into a certain place or abstract location

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that will raise

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a dangerous generation

dangerous generation

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for example

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a father or mother

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express in words

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a score

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tell an untruth; pretend with intent to deceive

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people should have respect and to not risk

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relationships with their friends or family should always be truthful.

Mon Jan 20 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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