Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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In recent years, the deaths and injuries associated with many dangerous sports are giving serious concern to the society. Some people,

therefore

, think that all extreme sports should be banned, and yet I would argue that people should have the rights to choose any sports. It sounds logical that a ban on all dangerous sporting activities is advisable despite the consequences. In fact, even when individuals are well-prepared and have all the right equipment to participate in these sports, the dangers are still present.

This

means that prohibiting all those sports can help prevent players from being seriously injured or having fatal consequences which are caused by these hidden dangers.

In addition

, many extreme sports

such

as boxing represent violence, which is very likely to encourage aggressive thoughts and behaviours of viewers, especially young children.

However

, banning these kinds of sports can place many athletes in the state of joblessness and

therefore

lead to several other social issues. Not only can allow people to freely participate in any sports solve unemployment issues, it can

also

increase social well-being.

Firstly

, several people have an innate talent for sports that are sometimes dangerous. Avoiding banning these sports could help create better employment opportunities not only for them, but

also

for employees in related industries like advertising.

Second

, the main purpose of playing sports, whether dangerous or not, is to have fun, recreation and entertainment.

This

may effectively help players or even audiences to release stress after hard work, thereby improving their productivity and giving a boost to the economy. In conclusion, while acknowledging the real risks, the right of individuals to take part in sports of their choice should be retained.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

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Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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severe injuries
fatalities
base jumping
bull running
extreme skiing
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well-being
regulating
avoidable harm
healthcare costs
burdening
personal freedom
autonomy
training
equipment
mitigated
personal satisfaction
mental health benefits
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public safety
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stringent safety standards
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safeguarding
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