In order to study at university students are required to pay expensivetuition fee.Not all students can afford them so some people think that university edudation should be free for everyone.What extend do you agree or disagree.

Most of the universities required high tuition fee in order to study.
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Therefore, some
students cannot afford these expensive fees
,
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,
thus
number of people think that academic
education
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has
to free for everyone.In my opinion,! c
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Completely
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agree
this
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situation, it
is best key to assist
university
education
for everybody.
Firstly
, a good reason to abolish
university
fees is,
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t gives equal opportunity for all students regardless rich and poor background.At the present number of students who have g
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a great inspiration
to learn,
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owever unable
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however, unable
to enter
university
because of their background.U
nfortunaly nowadays
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Unfortunately, nowadays
Unfortunately nowadays
society more and more people discriminating themselves for
education
level, if all people have equal option to get academic
education
this
issue will no longer appear.
Secondly
, having no fees for
university
education
means students will no longer have to work a^,
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costs.
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the UK
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either way
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Time
w
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due to pay their tuition fees.
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Furthermore, students
can only focus on their
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far better results
far better result
a far better result
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