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In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could.

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Many countries, do not recycle
waste
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 as much as possible.
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 essay will discuss the main reasons why
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 has happened and show the effects of the problem. Lack of facilities and lack of
time
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 are the main reasons of
waste
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 recycle. Some people throw away their garbage without recycling because they aren'
t
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 enough facilities that they separate it. In many countries, people do not recycle their
rubbish
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 as much as they could
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, they realize which have to distance wet and dry
waste
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, but they aren'
t
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 recycling bin that they do it. As an example, the Mazandaran people who live in north Iran like recycling their
rubbish
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, but there are not have a enough recycle bin about the subject.
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, people don'
t
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 have adequate
time
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 about recycling their
rubbish
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. They prefer to use something which convenient and easy access
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 as
plastic
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.
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, mums who work outside home use
plastic
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 containers because it's not necessary to wash dishes and they don'
t
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 worry about it breaking down. Lack of recycling can increase
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 resources and destroy of
soil
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 which are the main effect of problems. Today, lack of
time
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 is the most important effect of
waste
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 resources of nature. Use excessive of
plastic
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 and papers which are disposable will cause many factories more and more products it. The statistics show, many manufacturing companies in all over the world more and more products
plastic
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 or papers for using people.
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, there are many factories in America that hard try to produce appliances disposable; so, they need to use more resources like trees for products paper devices.
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 destroy of
soil
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 is the most main occupation many people. They more production
rubbish
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 while
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 work will cause destroy of
soil
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. Some trash like
plastic
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 or paper that are left on the ground
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 is while that It will take a century for these materials to decompose. For simple, when people throw away their
rubbish
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 In different places like seas or forests
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 garbage remains in nature Which damages the
soil
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 for its natural degradation. In conclusion, shortage of facilities and lack of
time
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 are the main cause and
soil
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 destruction and
waste
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 of resources are effective right not recycling.

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