Some people feel that children should be educated in single sex schools; others argue that mixed schools are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, in most of the
country there
is the possibility for children Accept comma addition
country, there
to attend
either single-sex schools or co-educational schools. In past time, male and female couldn’t go Suggestion
attending
in
the same Suggestion
to
school
, so there were only single-sex schools and for this
reason people didn’t have any choice and must send their children to that type of schools.
Consequently
, now, there are more and more co-educational schools than single-sex schools which are becoming less common. Indeed, some parents don’t agree on sending their children to single-sex schools because this
could cause problems in their future. Even though, single-sex schools seem to be more secure (controlled), where teachers can teach better and parents would be less worried on problems and arguments which can happen between the two different sex
. Actually, these arguments are good for the development and growing of the children.
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sexes
For instance
, in mixed school
is represented the real society where people are not divided into the two sex
and have to work together and collaborate. So, co-educational helps to share ideas and confront opinions among several people who will be Suggestion
sexes
next
citizens of the world. Of course, diversity can generate fighting, but this
is something that a child has to experience. (
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Moreover
, this
schools
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school
help
to develop the socialization of the children and start to send them to the right way Suggestion
helps
for
life)
To sum up, I personally agree that children who attend Suggestion
of
single
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a single school
school
would have some disadvantages in their future life, because society is mixed and
the best time to learn how to live properly is actually childhood. In my opinion, Accept comma addition
mixed, and
school
is a place for learning how to live with other people, for building/establish relationships and not only for memorizing topics.Submitted by kaloo.michela on
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