Your friend has asked you to help him/her to ﬁnd a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher. In your letter, you should tell: what experience the teacher has why you think he/she is suitable how to get in touch with the teacher. write 150 words

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Dear Sarah, It's been so long since we have spoken. How have you been? How is our dear little Ronit doing? You remember the

last

time we spoke, you had told me that you were looking for a music teacher for Ronit, so that he can learn classical music. I have found an excellent teacher for him. I had been to a musical concert yesterday where I meet Mrs. Jane She has done her Masters in classical music and has been teaching young kids from the past five years. She has

also

been helping her students do live concerts.

Although

she has vast experience and qualifications, I believe she will be suitable for your son because she is very friendly with children.

Moreover

, I have received some good feedback from another friend whose daughter has been Mrs.Jane's student from past two years. I have spoken to her regarding Ronit's admission. All you have to do is, call her on Thursday afternoon at 2.00pm on phone no: 0123456789. You can send her an email as well on: [email protected] Write me back once you speak to her Lots of Love, Sonia

Wed Jan 22 2020

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

189 words

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