Now a days the increasing amount of garbage is a real concern. Why is this happening? What can be done to resolve it ?

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Garbage includes all sorts of useless t
hings whether
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things, whether
from house or an industry. Handling of i
ncreasing piles
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the increasing piles
of
waste
is m
ain problem
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the main problem
of present time and
this
issue will never end in future
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here
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There
are a lot of causes and t
here
of them or themselves
their
possible solutions behind
this
situation. Natural environment was most valuable thing for our ancestors and they were quite care full about
this
god gifted phenomenon
,
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,
h
owever with
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however, with
the advancement of technology and over
population
this
situation has become worse
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ne
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One
main cause of increasing today
waste
is that our
population
pressure
,a
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,
s with the increase of n
umber
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the number
of people food demand and other life necessities demand has increased which stimulate the implementation of more industries.
This
action will produce more
waste
. Another main cause of
waste
increment is the lack of sources of handling
waste
products
such
as machinery for collection of trash and land of dumping
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here
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There
a
re
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is
a list o
n
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of
countries who don’t have resources o
f
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for
handling
waste
and t
here for
(in formal usage, especially legal usage) for that or for it
therefor
they are giving t
here
of them or themselves
their
waste
to other countries by paying handsome amount One of the ways to tackle
this
situation is to control
population
by regime of a country
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y the developing suitable rules along with awareness and public moral duties regarding putting trash in dustbins
instead
of throwing in open street or on r
oad.
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the road
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urther more
in addition
Furthermore
handsome budget from regime to municipal department will help it to buy more infrastructure and labour for
waste
management
.
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.
In a n
utshell it
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nutshell, it
is justifiable to say that m
ain causes
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the main causes
of garbage increment in present time are increasing
population
and lack of land for t
rash but
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trash, but
through
population
control and by developing suitable p
olices
a plan of action adopted by an individual or social group
policies
for
w
aste handling department
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the waste handling department
this
condition is in our hands.

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