New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Living in the 21th century, the high-tech era has revolutionized the world.

Concequently

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Consequently

, how the younger generation spend their leisure

time

has been dramatically changed. In the

followng

about to be mentioned or specified

following

essay, whether

this

change is beneficial will be discussed. To start with, there are two major merits.

Firstly

, compared to the traditional

way which parents

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way in which parents

need to take their children to learning

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

or libraries to enjoy their free

time

. New technologies provide easy access to the same resource from home.

For example

, e-books and hand craft manuals are all available on the Internet.

This

is not only more

efficient but

Accept comma addition

efficient, but

also

saves a great deal of

time

for busy parents. Another benefit brought by the evolving technology is the invention of virtual reality games. These games allow children to learn real-world tasks

such

as flying a plane, or driving cars. Some video games,

for example

, puzzle games, could even help with developing motor skills and critical thinking, and encouraging their imagination, as well as concentration.

On the other hand

, there are some drawbacks along with the different lifestyle. There is nothing more important than children's health condition. Staring at the screens for too long may lead to optical issues

such

as shortsighted; sedentary

lifestly

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

for children could result in obesity at

young age

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a young age

; lack of exercise might cause cardiovascular related diseases as well. Not to mention, with the high-tech

lifestly

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

, children spend less

time

getting along with their friends in person, which means a potential jeopardy of psychological issue

such

as social isolation and anxiety disorder when facing crowds or unfamiliar environment might arise.

In addition

, people growing up isolated are

usualy

under normal conditions

usually

lack of proficient interpersonal relationship and social skills. To conclude, it is crucial to prioritize children's

wellbeing

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well being

, I personally believe that the disadvantages

brough

take something or somebody with oneself somewhere

brought

by new technologies outweigh the advantages.