The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is a
true notion that the
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notion that the true
way of seeing the
life
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of the elderly is completely different to the young as having fully traditional ideas about
life
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. In a sense, it is felt that the viewpoints of the older generations are seen
unbeneficial
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for the preparation of the young people
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in
modern days. While I agree to a certain extent that the older people's opinions may not meet the expectation of the young people as being outdated, I
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belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
the advice of them can be far more advantageous than thought once they have hard times of
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. On the one hand, admittedly the older generations may have obsolete ideas regarding the way of lifestyle which might be inappropriate in
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modern age. Take, state of the art and high tech gadgets,
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example, which
they hold
negative opinion
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a negative opinion
negative opinions
about using them. To be more precise, they believe
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kind of technological advances
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as up to date mobile phones or high spec laptops may have
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a detrimental effect
detrimental effects
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located at or attached to
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the development of the young people.
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,
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younger
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generations may not follow the views of them due to the fact that they are reaping the benefits by means of utilising
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devices so as to broaden their knowledge and outlook, as well.
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younger
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generations can reap the advantages of traditional opinions of the older generations when they face utterly intricate challenges of
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. Since the elderly are far more experienced than the young by experiencing highs and lows of
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, they can teach the youngsters how to overcome difficulties when they are broken. In China,
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, the older people are held in high regards owing to the fact that they are considered to guide the young adults to solve their problems irrespective of personal
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or career matters. In fact, the elderly advise them based on their traditional values. In conclusion,
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I admit the traditional ideas of the older generations are believed to be unhelpful to some extent, I purport that the young adults should take into account the traditional thoughts of the elderly as equally important as trendy ones.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditional ideas
  • Modern life
  • Younger generations
  • Stability
  • Guidance
  • Foundation
  • Cultural heritage
  • Rigid gender roles
  • Resistance to new technologies
  • Adaptability
  • Innovative solutions
  • Respecting elders
  • Maintaining family bonds
  • Stifle progress
  • Fusion of ideas
  • Outdated values
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