In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
In several nations humans
are worried
about the quantity of youths who are above their weights. Suggestion
worry
Firstly
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this
essay will review the possible problems that might happen and Linking Words
secondly
, will recommend a solution.
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First
of all, being obese is obviously a disease and Linking Words
it
mostly seen in poor nations it is
it's
instead
of wealthy ones. The main reason is economical issues, namely, lack of production and human power. Linking Words
For instance
, if there is not enough employees in factories, you cannot produce goods and you cannot sell them and grow your economy. If the economy is poor, society tries to buy cheap and unhealthy foods Linking Words
such
as chocolate bar,
Biscuit and pasta because they cannot afford to purchase healthy and nutritionally rich products like meat and fish. These reasons are playing an important role Linking Words
on
being overweight. To summarize, if a country is economically weak, there is a higher chance to be overweight and unhealthy.
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at
of
On the other hand
, authority must produce food, whether its economy is good or broke. I think none of the presidents want their country to suffer from being overweight. One possible solution is making your food at home. Linking Words
For instance
, you can make yoghurt or bread in your house, Linking Words
hence
, you will not have to buy them from markets, Linking Words
thus
, you can save your money to buy healthy but costly products.
In conclusion, some nations are suffering from obesity, Linking Words
therefore
, people are dying or suffering from sickness. In my opinion, governments have to take care of their citizens and support them economically, Linking Words
for instance
, they should give them an extra salary for each birth.Linking Words
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