Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent developments ever will. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technological breakthroughs have indeed a huge impact on people’s everyday lives.
However
, it is considered that advancements on
earlier technology have more significant benefits on majority as compared with the latest discoveries and inventions these could ever offer. Suggestion
of
in
On
my point of view, even though it is obvious that previous developments are Suggestion
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continuously
helping our lives, I still believe that the recent ones would definitely change our daily living and probably we will be dependent on these in the near future as well.
Given the appliances and gadgets that we have seemingly without interruption
continually
on
our homes, Suggestion
in
for example
, our washing machine, vacuum cleaner, telephones and television, these are
inventions in the past that are continuously improving to make our lives better. Most of these things are improvised to a smart Suggestion
were
devices
which help us lessen the manual Suggestion
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efforts we
do to complete a certain task like cleaning & drying. Accept comma addition
efforts, we
Moreover
, our telephones and tv become smart mobile phones & tv which can now be connected to the internet which allows us to communicate even from the farthest corner of the earth. Smart TVs, likewise
, provide us more choices of shows for entertainment. Having said that, it is undoubtedly accurate that these technologies have definitely improve
the way we live.
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have definitely improved
However
, it is supported by some that recent technology and developments that are taken in place would not benefit humanity like what the earlier technology has been doing. As opposed to this
, inventions & discoveries like GPS, mobile applications, robotics automation
, artificial intelligence are still for continuous research and study for the betterment of everyone’s life, including the ordinary ones. Accept comma addition
robotics, automation
For instance
, mobile application are
available and are helping nowadays for our transportation, shopping and entertainment which are almost impossible before to think that it would fit in a pocket for just a click from a small gadget. Automation & artificial intelligence Suggestion
is
were
just a thing in private companies before, like business and healthcare establishments which eliminates manual and clerical process and even aid in the field of medicine and surgery. Suggestion
had been
have been
Nevertheless
, it becomes almost available as well in our homes like applications namely
Siri, Alexa, Bixby & Accept comma addition
applications, namely
Google which
we use their intelligence to help us in our certain part of our daily Accept comma addition
Google, which
lives
.
In conclusion, though the recent developments are still under study, I believe that it will eventually impact our lives just like the earlier inventions that makes our lives easier. Just like other technologies, these will eventually become cheaper that would Suggestion
life
also
allow ordinary people to have access on
it and makes lives more comfortable.Suggestion
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