Some people think the government should take measures regarding the healthy lifestyles of individuals. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People consider health as wealth,

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why it is very important that we take good care of ourselves by eating nutritious foods and having a regular exercise. It

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is believed

that to achieve a healthy body, is mainly our own responsibility, but others suggest that

government

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should

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ensure

healthy

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a healthy diet

healthy diets

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among individuals. I strongly believe that in order to be fit and well, everyone should choose wisely the foods they eat, and proper exercise should be in one’s routine too. To some extent, the

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should

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guarantee that establishments and businesses in their community

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are providing

healthy foods for public consumption. Major contributing

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factors

to be healthy is to consider what to eat and not. As everyone know, foods like vegetables, fruits, fish and other kinds of meat should be part of everyone’s

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. As a matter of fact, people should consider exercising as well to be physically fit. Both the foods we eat and the

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routine, we

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being

own’s accountability in order to be healthy.

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, we should avoid

bad habit

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bad habits

like smoking and drinking too much alcohol as it will only result

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in

serious illness.

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, some argued that though they want to maintain a healthy

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, only limited supplies of nutritious foods are available in their area.

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in urban areas, vegetables, fruits and fish are not abundant, and when these become available the commodity prices are significantly higher.

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why, some prefer to consume a more affordable

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food

that would fit within their budget. For

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reason, the

government

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should find necessary actions to address

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issue to make sure their people are living in a healthy

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.

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, in times of poverty or natural calamities, it is imperative that the

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provides them nutritious foods when the people lack their own supply. In my opinion, it is vital that every individual is responsible for the foods they eat and their lifestyle for the sake of their own health.

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, the

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should implement programs and laws to ensure that their people is consuming the right kind of foods in their daily consumption and especially in times of need.