ASSIGNMENT Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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These days, there has been an increasing number of

road

accidents in which several safety measures need to be put in place to reduce these.

Although

, a significant number of people claim that the best measure to increase safety on

road

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the road

is by reducing the speed limits on vehicles, others opine that several other ways are better.

This

essay will discuss both sides of the argument and give

reason

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reasons

why the best way is by reducing maximum speed limits on vehicles. Those who claim that maximum limits on vehicles should be reduced, including myself, believe that the major cause of

road

accident is over-speeding. To buttress

this

, according to

Federal

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the Federal Road Safety Commission

Road

Safety Commission of Nigeria, two-thirds of accidents on Nigerian roads is

as a result

of over-speeding.

Thus

, reducing the speed limits on vehicles would significantly reduce

road

accidents. Others,

however

, believe that there are numerous better

ways

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ways, such

such

as regular inspection of vehicles and rehabilitation of bad roads. To these

set

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sets

of people, doing

this

is far better than reducing maximum speed limits. To

further

explain these points, it was published by

Sun newspaper

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the Sun newspaper

that a large number of vehicles on major roads in Nigeria

has worn

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have worn

out tyres which can easily

leads

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lead

accident

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an accident

the accident

accidents

, it was

also

published by

this

same newspaper that several accidents is

as a result

of bad motorable roads.

Hence

, it is not surprising why others support

this

view. In conclusion, even though there are other measures that can be put in place to improve

road

safety, I believe the best way is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

267 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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*ASSIGNMENT* Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. *Discuss both sides and give your opinion.*

Include an introduction and conclusion

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ASSIGNMENT Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.