*ASSIGNMENT* Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. *Discuss both sides and give your opinion.*

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These days, there has been an increasing number of
road
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accidents in which several safety measures need to be put in place to reduce these.
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, a significant number of people claim that the best measure to increase safety on
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road
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the road
is by reducing the speed limits on vehicles, others opine that several other ways are better.
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reasons
why the best way is by reducing maximum speed limits on vehicles. Those who claim that maximum limits on vehicles should be reduced, including myself, believe that the major cause of
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accident is over-speeding. To buttress
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, according to
Federal
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the Federal Road Safety Commission
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Safety Commission of Nigeria, two-thirds of accidents on Nigerian roads is
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of over-speeding.
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, reducing the speed limits on vehicles would significantly reduce
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accidents. Others,
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, believe that there are numerous better
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ways, such
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as regular inspection of vehicles and rehabilitation of bad roads. To these
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sets
of people, doing
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is far better than reducing maximum speed limits. To
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explain these points, it was published by
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the Sun newspaper
that a large number of vehicles on major roads in Nigeria
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have worn
out tyres which can easily
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lead
to
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an accident
the accident
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, it was
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published by
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same newspaper that several accidents is
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of bad motorable roads.
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, it is not surprising why others support
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view. In conclusion, even though there are other measures that can be put in place to improve
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safety, I believe the best way is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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