Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals.How true this statement? How far colours influence people & health and capacity for work? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Colour

has always played an important role in the human history and according to some recent research, it affects our consciousness and mood. I personally believe that a proper

colour

represents a good will and shows tenderness and

this

is why public buildings should have proper

colour

and decoration.

To begin

with, we are associated with different colours from the very beginning of our life. Parents and teachers teach us different colours and scientists believe that a child’s ability to classify different colours is connected with his calibre and talent.

Thus our

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Thus, our

brains associate

this colours

Suggestion

these colours

this colour

with our moods and feelings.

For instance

, the red light on the streets sends an immediate alert to our brain to stop our vehicle while the green

colour

signals us to go ahead.

Thus

we are trained to react and feel differently with the association of colours. From

this

perspective, it is important to use soothing and accepted colours in places like schools, hospitals and offices.

Furthermore

, we tend to associate colours with different events from our personal experience. For

this

reasons

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reason

, some people relate red with blood while white with peace. Universally blue is the

colour

of nature and fewer people would complain about it.

Besides

, people in some countries relate colours with certain moods.

For example

, more than one quarter Americans believe that the blue has

something

an indefinite thing

anything

to do with comfort and cosiness while red represents violence. Due to the influence of colours in human psychology, all renowned food and beverage retailers have their own

colour

schemes. According to an article published on the Huffington Post, a combination of slate blue mixes with olive green and soft cream has helped to foster a team environment in many organisations.

This

also

states that it has increased

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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