You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement. Write a letter to accommodation officer regarding this. - Describe the situation - Explain the problem and why it is difficult to work. - Say what kind of accommodation you prefer.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have

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concern

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regarding my new

roommate

. I stay in

room

number 102 in Block C. My new

roommate

always plays loud music

especially

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during the

night time

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. I didn't have any issues with my previous

roommate

. She was

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silent woman and never use to disturb me.

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, I am finding it very

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to have

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proper communication. From

the

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day one, we haven't spoken to each other properly. She is really very rude and verbally abusive many

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times. I tried to resolve

this

issue by myself, hoping everything would be fine but wasn't successful enough. Is there a possibility of changing her

room

or you can provide me with

different

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room

where the

roommate

is decent and not much talkative

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I will be very glad if you provide me with

single

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room

. I am ready to pay any extra payment for single accommodation. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Saraswati

Tue Jan 28 2020

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