You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement. Write a letter to accommodation officer regarding this. - Describe the situation - Explain the problem and why it is difficult to work. - Say what kind of accommodation you prefer.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I have
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regarding my new
roommate
. I stay in
room
number 102 in Block C. My new
roommate
always plays loud music
especially
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during the
night time
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. I didn't have any issues with my previous
roommate
. She was
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silent woman and never use to disturb me.
However
, I am finding it very
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to have
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proper communication. From
the
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day one, we haven't spoken to each other properly. She is really very rude and verbally abusive many
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times. I tried to resolve
this
issue by myself, hoping everything would be fine but wasn't successful enough. Is there a possibility of changing her
room
or you can provide me with
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room
where the
roommate
is decent and not much talkative
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I will be very glad if you provide me with
single
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room
. I am ready to pay any extra payment for single accommodation. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Saraswati

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