Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #information #research #business #world

First I

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First, I

would like to discuss why is it important to share much information about scientific research, business and the academic world. When I was in

school I

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school, I

didn't know about that where should I

go where

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go, where

should I

persue

carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in

pursue

further

studies and what discipline should I choose, So

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for

about

that time some senior help me and guide

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about where should I go and what should I do.

Similarly when

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Similarly, when

teacher gave me a topic

to do

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doing

research on it, there was a senior who helped me out. And those who think that they don't what to share their thoughts, ideas with other others is totally disgusting and I

'm totally disagree

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totally disagree

with that type of people.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

information sharing
scientific research
business
academic world
advancement of knowledge
progress
collaboration
cross-disciplinary research
open access
democratization of information
transparency
credibility
intellectual property
security concerns
commercial interests

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Some people think that education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays. More and more people decide to have children in their later life .what do you think are for this reasons. Do the advantages of the trend outweigh the disadvantages.

Due to the development of the internet, public libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many students find it is harder to study at university or college compared to when they were in grade school. Why is this? What are some possible solutions for this problem?