Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Shopping! Most enjoyed and
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
activity by young adults today, in almost every part of the world. Getting to know the requirement, in the
market
and matching to its style is a new form of entertainment for the present generation.
Firstly
, I consider it as
positive
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positively
because, by walking out for shopping, people can increase the knowledge of products in the
market
.
Secondly
, shopping develops self confidence as public speaking is involved. Only by getting into the
market
, buyers can understand the value
for
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of
money and skills like
compare
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to compare
comparing
-contrast
also
develops. To present an example: only if a student enters a
market
to buy or as a companion with a friend could check
price
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the price
of a
perticular
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
item like: bag, mobile, shoe or book. Later can decide from which
market
the required
product
can be purchased.
Therefore
the knowledge of
value
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the value
for
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of
a
product
is gained and quality is understood. On the
otherside
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other side
, walking out for shopping could lead to
extravagent
unrestrained, especially with regard to feelings
extravagant
expenditure. Never ending lust for new products, getting introduced in
market
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the market
. Not to forget, waste of time and
also
feeling
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a feeling
the feeling
feelings
of
disatifaction
the feeling of being displeased and discontent
dissatisfaction
could increase as funding every new introduction is not suitable
to
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for
every pocket or budget. Not every
product
displayed is required, but the style of presentation attracts walker, motivating them to purchase the
product
.
This
can be set as an example
for
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of
wasting money or developing the guilt of not buying. Leisure activities could be many, but shopping is mainly chosen by the teens as it involves
lot
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a lot
lots
of moving around to
excert
put to use
exert
their energy, discussion about the
market
and basically spending fun time with peer group. Not to forget eating and drinking together in different environment
bring
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brings
pleasure to them. Being wise at the time of
shopping
the commercial enterprise of moving goods and materials
shipping
will be the best advice to all.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • leisure activity
  • consumer culture
  • material possession
  • social experience
  • disposable income
  • tech-savvy
  • convenience
  • fashion trends
  • overconsumption
  • economic stimulation
  • retail industry
  • materialism
  • debt
  • consumer spending
  • browsing
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