Many people say smoking should be banned and some say it is not a good idea. What is your opinion on this? Use your own experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant experiences.

Yes it is good the smoking should be banned as we know it kills and it is not good for health and it can cause mouth cancer as if we talk about the badness of smoking because it has bad impact on society and on our culture as well so for smoking is very dangerous for humans and if we talk about the experience than our internal system is naturally made by god like if there is something and which is not good for our respiratory system
then
it comes out automatically so once my friend addicted by smoking and he was in very bad condition due to over smoking and he was unable to talk due to mouth cancer later his family spent too much money on his medical treatment and now he is just in normal condition but he is not in good health so "keep avoid smoking because it kills"

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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