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Some people believe in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some ways. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #hobby
I agree to some extent to the above mentioned statement, which I will be explaining below.
Firstly
, I will discuss about how
hobby
Suggestion
the hobby
 is important in our lives. As, in today's world, the level of stress is increased, so human beings look for ways that can relax them mentally and physically.
For example
, the stress of health, financial worries etc. We definitely require
some thing
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
 to survive by relaxing ourselves. Hobbies for an individual help us regain our lost confidence after a failure. According to some
peoples'
Suggestion
people's
 belief about hobbies to be difficult in order it to be enjoyable, I will
some how
in some unspecified way or manner; or by some unspecified means
somehow
 agree to
this
. Because, as we like doing difficult tasks as our hobbies, we tend to take out time for it. And, as we put more efforts to accomplish and
fullfil
put in effect
fulfil
fulfilled
 it, we get the winner feelings.
If
Accept comma addition
If, for
for example
, something
simpler
Suggestion
simple
 is to be done
,
Accept space
,
 we somehow ignores
thinkinng
the process of using your mind to consider something carefully
thinking
 it as a very basic and
simpler
Suggestion
simple
 task. So somehow
its
it is
it's
 true that hobby is supposed to be difficult to be enjoyable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sense of accomplishment
  • overcoming obstacles
  • gratifying
  • continuous source of enjoyment
  • relaxing activities
  • unwind and de-stress
  • counterproductive
  • mental break
  • subjective
  • personal preference
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