You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear Uncle, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am coming

week

into

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your town. It’s been

very

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long that we haven't got

chance

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to talk with each other. I hope everybody is doing great there. I am coming to your city to attend an event which is related to my business project. I am a manager of that program so I need to be there two days prior to the event. My event will run from Thursday to Saturday which will be basically for three days. Because of that

reason

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I will stay in town total for five days. I would like to ask you for a

favor

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if I can get stay in your house that will be very helpful for me. As you already know that I have food allergy from childhood, I am unable to eat outside. I will be more comfortable at your house because I will get

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homemade

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home made

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food rather than staying at

hotel

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the hotel

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. But at the same

time

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I want to let you know that I will pay for my stay. I will be happier if I will get some quality time to spend with you. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Give my regards to everyone in

family

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. Thank You,

xyz

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XYZ

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

215 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

anticipate
accommodation
arrive/depart
duration
itinerary
gracious hospitality
household
inconvenience
lodging
reimburse
temporary residence
travel arrangements
visit
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