You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear Uncle, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you that I am coming

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week

into

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your town. It’s been

very

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long that we haven't got

chance

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to talk with each other. I hope everybody is doing great there. I am coming to your city to attend an event which is related to my business project. I am a manager of that program so I need to be there two days prior to the event. My event will run from Thursday to Saturday which will be basically for three days. Because of that

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I will stay in town total for five days. I would like to ask you for a

favor

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if I can get stay in your house that will be very helpful for me. As you already know that I have food allergy from childhood, I am unable to eat outside. I will be more comfortable at your house because I will get

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homemade

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home made

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food rather than staying at

hotel

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the hotel

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. But at the same

time

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I want to let you know that I will pay for my stay. I will be happier if I will get some quality time to spend with you. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Give my regards to everyone in

family

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. Thank You,

xyz

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XYZ

drkeyapatel1Thu Jan 30 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

215 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

anticipate
accommodation
arrive/depart
duration
itinerary
gracious hospitality
household
inconvenience
lodging
reimburse
temporary residence
travel arrangements
visit
warm welcome

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Nowadays, most of the information is available on the Internet, whereas in the past, knowledge was stored in books and on paper. Do you think the advantages of this situation outweigh its disadvantages?

Some cities have spent a large amount of money on bicycles. Why has this happened? Do you think it is the best way to solve traffic problems?

In many professional sports, the use of banned substances to enhance performance is on the rise. what are the causes and solutions

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?

Robot and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the work place. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?