the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city a six-month period in 2011

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of

queries

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a tourist information centre received during the first half of 2001 via phone calls and letter/electronic

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as well as

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questionings made by

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in person. Generally speaking,

people

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started making more

enquiries

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in person after March 2001

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email and letter

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dropped. As the graph suggests, the tourist information

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received around 1800

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from

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in January 2001 of which the maximum came through phones. Against 800 phone

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at that time they got 600 emails and letters and 400 in-person visits from

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regarding information. The

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of emails or postal

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dropped over the period and in June the

office

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received only 200

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queries

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, one-

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that of starting of the year. Interestingly, more

people

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visited the

office

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to log their questions and

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reached

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1200 in the middle of the year. Though telephone

enquiries

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were predominant at the beginning of the year, they remained constant between January and April. Afterwards, the

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enquiries

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got higher and reached

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about 1100 in June 2001, slightly lower than the

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of

enquiries

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made in person. The total

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of

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made by

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to

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tourist

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increased to nearly 2500, almost 500 more

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than that of January

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