Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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as sky diving, skiing etc.

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o perform that. Because of that many people thinks that it should be banned in the world. My view is described below with the ex

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you will not survive. Because of high risk of death is associated with it, it should not be allowed in the society.

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umping and he was standing at the highest point from where he has to jump down and he saw at the bottom. He got heart attack after looking at the depth. So if go

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the government

as to take some steps towards extreme sports. To conclude, In my op

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opinion, I

gree with the statement that activities associated with the potential risks should be banned than only nobody will try to learn or wish to do those.wh

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they have to promote sports which can help people physically and mentally.