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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

#people #individuals #companies
By the graph below, it can be shown the
rate
 of
television
 and radio audiences, start in October and end in December. The survey was held for 24 hours straight, with the result in a percentage. In a quick view, it can be told by
two
 pick hours at 08.00 am and 08.00 pm that
television
 and radio audiences prefer
two
 different times to consume information. But, unlike
two
 times in the middle before, at the start and the end of the day, both audiences are
in
Suggestion
on
 the bottom line.
First
, look for
radio listener
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the radio listener
radio listeners
a radio listener
.
This
 group starts with a good rating, it is more than 5% and excessively rises to almost 30%
at
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in
 08.00 am. After
achieves
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achieving
 the highest
rate
, the
rate
 gradually goes down and turns up at 04.00 am
in
Suggestion
on
 the
next
 day.
Second
, the
television
 audiences, who start the
rate
in
Suggestion
at
 zero and going up and down and start to quickly go higher
at
Suggestion
in
 05.00 am. After
stay
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staying
 in prime time for
two
 hours, the
television
rate
jump
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jumps
 down to almost
two
 percent
at
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in
 02.00 am
in
Suggestion
on
 the
next
 day.

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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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